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Hello All,
I've recently started taking pictures using my Rebel XSi. Here is the link to my flickr album. Please provide some feedback on how the images could have been improved/composition etc. Flickr: Big Island Hawaii All the above pics except the night ones (lava meeting ocean) were taken in Big Island, Hawaii using kit lens. The night pics were taken using the Canon 55-250mm lens. Please let me know if I'm missing any obvious information.
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I think your framing, in most cases is pretty good... You should post one of the images in the correct critique section and you will get some good feedback.
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The framing is good, and the shot has a nice tranquil feeling. It's a pity the sky is not more colorful. As to the sharpness, it looks to me as if the tree in the foreground is sharp, but the distant trees are not. I suspect you focussed on the foreground and did not have enough depth of field.
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As for the skycolor, yeah, I was so disappointed that day as it was hazy (so did the other people who came to watch the beautiful sunset.) If you look my album in the original post, there's another image of the same location but with different settings (no post processing) that came out a bit saturated (?). @JCrazy - thank you
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You shot this at f/5.0. Since you're pretty close to the tree in the foreground, your DOF will be too narrow to keep both it and the trees in the background in sharp focus. You would probably want to go to at least f/9, probably f/11, to keep everything in focus. Going to f/9 is about 2 stops, going to f/11 about 2.5. This would bring your shutter speed to somewhere between 1/5 sec and 1/2 sec, which shouldn't be an issue as I assume you're using a tripod already. I'm curious, the EXIF says you used an off-camera flash, what did you light? |
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