Lake Onteario by night....

[Art]

Hi all this pic was taken in Rochester N.Y. walking in the lake ontario area surrounding by the moon.

Since it was taken with a Canon Rebel 3000 and Kodak Ultra 400 Film, later scanned, there is no EXIF to share

Can you please critic composition?

Thanks Art

[barabe]

Hello art,

I think you shot is missing something, It looks a bit abstract and has too much negative space for my taste. Also i find it is a bit blurry, i don't know if you were using a tripod.

[Art]

Hi Martin indeed I did not used tripod
thanks for your comments
art

[zer8]

hi art...if you give more opening of the aperture and try to zoom in more would create a bokeh i think it will give more impact..

[Art]

zer8 you mean crop it ? I did not catch your comment
Thanks Art

[wal]

Night shots defenitely needs tripod..!, and smaller aperture, with long exposure time.. the image is too blurry to enjoy. too much negative space as martin said.

[Art]

I fully agree with you, tripod is key, thanks for your comments
Art