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Old 01-07-2010, 01:22 AM
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Any suggestions on how to improve on this? Please tell me what you like or dislike. Any comment is appreciated. I hope to enter this in a large contest in the spring under the black and white category.

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Old 01-07-2010, 04:37 AM
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Personally I do not think you need to do anything to the shot. It gives that mystique of the days when baseball was a real game where the played "for the love of the game."
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I think this shot is perfect.
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One question that I have... In the grouping of people on the far right of the picture, is the person's arm coming out of the side of the picture distracting?

I'm not sure if I can clone it out very well and if I crop the picture any, I 'll lose some of the scoreboard. It might not be a big deal, but I was wondering if it is very noticeable to others.

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Old 01-09-2010, 01:59 AM
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In the larger view the arm is noticeable but not too distracting, I don't think that you should crop it. I like the railing in the view. The upper deck is just a wee bit distracting to me, but manageable. The clouds are cool.
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I really like this shot. It sets distant and calm mood. The bright light near located in the top center of the picture is very distracting.
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I love the clouds they make a great background.
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i really like this shot JFisher14 but can't really offer any better ideas
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Old 01-11-2010, 11:08 PM
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Remember one thing it does not violate the rule of thirds. Which is a major part of photo composition. I did not notice the arm until it was mentioned.
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I like this capture as it is.
This is a superb capture.
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