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Old 12-27-2009, 08:09 PM
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I would really like to know what you think on this photo. I am still a beginner and would like to improve. I have done very little editing: increased contrast, and added border.
Also, I am not using a professional camera, so there's no point in giving details on exposure and stuff =/. I will soon invest in a new camera though, any suggestions are highly appreciated.
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Old 12-28-2009, 12:12 AM
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I like the composition - the focus of the photograph is clear. I'd like to see a little more foreground/stuff below the castle.
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Old 12-28-2009, 12:55 AM
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I like what you're trying to convey here, However, the building is not very well in focus, so I'm afraid I had to give this one a thumbs down.
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Old 12-28-2009, 02:01 AM
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Hi glenbonnici,

This is a nice image. I'm going to agree with Buddhanature and say that I would like to see more of the ground below the castle, i.e., a little less of the sky. Also, there is something bright in the lower right corner, I would clone that out.

Nice image.

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Thanks for the feedback all of you
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Old 12-28-2009, 08:24 PM
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I concur with all the above ^^^^
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Old 12-29-2009, 02:29 AM
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I like the composition...... however there is less drama in the sky.. it'd been great if there was more shape and colors in it, but... the weather is unpredictable. Good idea and keep up...
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