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Old 12-21-2009, 01:18 PM
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Hi,
Here i am presenting the tree branch that is shooting downwards.Tell me whether it is attractive. My particular question is about the composition.tell me your ideas...

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Old 12-23-2009, 02:58 PM
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The branch is a nice visual guide that is leading the eyes towards the mountains in the background.
It is too bad the tree to the left is blocking the view of the mountain. Perhaps a step or two to the right would have helped a bit.
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Old 12-23-2009, 03:04 PM
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I also wouldn't mind seeing some of the bottom cropped off. as tvoelcker mentioned, the mountain is a great secondary focal point, so perhaps a bit of a zoom on it would do it great.

Great work, keep at it!
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