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[Art]

Hi all this sculpture shows many ways to express your feelings

Can you please critic composition?

Thanks Art

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[See & Wonder]

Hey Art

I'm having a challenge with your photo I LOVE the sculpture, the wall with windows and the brick on the ground. But I'm wondering if it would be possible to shot it with out the post to the right side of the picture and if the wall could be lined up so that it doesn't distract from the sculpture but frames it.

Not sure if it would work but that's my 2 cents =)

Hope that helps
CW

[KansaiGreenie]

Hi Art,

Nice image. What an interesting sculpture. I think this image would work better as a vertical crop. That would eliminate some of the distractions on the right side.

KG

[Art]

Sure it helps, thanks to PP I will clone that post, lt me work on it
Art

[Art]

Thanks KG for your comments, as I mnetioned, I will do some retouch w/o moving from landscape to portrait
Art

[livexbixmusic]

Wow what a statue, definitely a fantastic subject to take a photo of cause its so unique in my opinion. I agree with the statement above that if you took a vertical shot this would have gotten rid of some of the other distractions going on in the photo. Also, instead of using the brick wall what was the other direction? Like if the photo would have been taken from the other side what would have been the background cause I don't know if I am digging the bricks. If it were cars or something, it might have allowed for a cool background if you had set your aperture to a smaller number in order to allow for the statue to the only thing in focus and not the traffic. Cool angle though, yet I am slightly confused as to how the mask on the statue is being held, but that just might be me.

Great work though, keep it coming.

[Art]

Appreciate your comments, I am going to work on it ( the statue at the end is one single piece )
Art