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Hi all, this shoot was taken in Niagara Canada, unfortunatelly after photoedition I've lost the EXIF

Can you please critic composition and exposure?

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I'm ok with the exposure but I think there is too much grass in the foreground.
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Could use a vigorous cropping of the bottom and both sides.
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I do enjoy the colors of this quite a bit. I think it would benefit from either grass up to the top thirds line, or the skyline down on the bottom third line. That way, you get 2/3rd sky, or 2/3rds grass.
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I agree. To much grass in the foreground. Nice try though.
I know that area well. I worked just to the right at the old Casino Niagara years ago..
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Thanks JohnnyA for your comments, I agree with all of you

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Thanks Lori for your comments I agree and I can crop it
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yes Sterling I can be better cropped
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Thanks sunvalley23 good suggestion

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