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Old 12-01-2009, 05:24 PM
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Default Split Tone Sailboat

Shot this at Chelsea Piers in New York.
Post processing was primarily noise reduction, levels, and split toning.
Full-res can be found at http://dl.dropbox.com/u/384746/sailboat.jpg

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Old 12-02-2009, 02:39 AM
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Depends on what you're after. Interesting mood. If the boat is really the subject, it blends into the background a bit much and is a bit small. Bring it out

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The composition looks fine to me. Maybe try brightening up the sails to bring more attention to the boat.
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hows this for the brightening?
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Please post your exif information, txs
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hows this for the brightening?
Definitely improved. The eye goes to the sail boat much faster.
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Much improved version.
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Old 12-02-2009, 08:16 PM
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Glad to hear it. by the way, the exif data is

Canon SD850
1/400 sec at f 11
11.82mm (dont know 35mm equivalent)
ISO 200
No flash
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Isolated shoreline buildings with lasso tool and applied shadow/highlight to give detail

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