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Old 11-10-2009, 05:16 PM
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I took this pic in Kudremukh National Park, India.

I would like to hear your views on how i could improved the pic in terms of composition.



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Old 11-10-2009, 05:51 PM
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Very nice lines running through out this composition provided by the rolling hills.
I like the human element but the person is too close to the side of the frame.
Might also boost the saturation just a tad to give the green a bit more pop.
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Old 11-10-2009, 05:58 PM
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Nice shot, saikiran.

Perhaps you'd like to read the Critique Forum Rules. That may help you get some answers.
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Old 11-12-2009, 04:46 PM
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I think this is a really nice image. I like the colors and composition and the tree provides for some nice visual interest to draw the eye in. Only thing I don't care for is the person, if they were positioned so they become more a part of the scene it would be better. Good job.

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