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Thoughts and improvements advice please T^aken just after sun down will fecth the original EXIF as this had a lil PP done but bnot too much ... just want critique etc on this and the second the place these are taken has been done a million times and now trying to find something different for them



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great shots. the only thing I can say you could improve on is the detail in the sky aside from that some good stuff!
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In the bottom shot (shame on you, the rules for this section clearly state one photo only) I find that the crossing of the poles in the foreground and the horizon in the background is a little messy. You could try picking a lower or a higher point of view.
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great shots. the only thing I can say you could improve on is the detail in the sky aside from that some good stuff!
Thank you I will be getting some ND filters in a month or two hopefully that will aid this...

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In the bottom shot (shame on you, the rules for this section clearly state one photo only) I find that the crossing of the poles in the foreground and the horizon in the background is a little messy. You could try picking a lower or a higher point of view.

oooooooops Sorry any Admins about! Thank you never really thought about that Icertainly will next time details are what leads to perfection thank you !
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