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Old 11-09-2009, 01:10 PM
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Hi.. this is taken in DC... I think low contract is making it dull..
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Old 11-09-2009, 07:34 PM
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hi do you
ask the guys in the critique section this is share you shots
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Old 11-09-2009, 07:46 PM
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Actually this IS the critique section not the share your shots. So you are in the right place, mailtoashish17

I would like to see more of the tree on the right to give the shot a bit more depth. Good picture, though.
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Looks fine to me.
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Old 11-10-2009, 02:08 AM
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The path in the foreground is leading the eyes out of the picture therefore I wouldn't include it in the foreground.
The limbs that partially frame the building are nice but the tree to the right is a distraction.
Perhaps try a tighter crop and a b&w conversion.
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Hey Guys..thanks for your valuable feedback.... just learning new things... Ashish
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