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This picture isn't perfect, but it's along the lines of what I was going for. I need any ideas that will help improve this type of picture. Thanks.
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Old 11-05-2009, 11:47 PM
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I don't have a whole lot to say about it, but I like it a lot! Great concept.

My only critique is the horizon line. It's a little crooked, which is funny because the pine cone is straight. Any EXIF data with this?
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Old 11-06-2009, 09:41 AM
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nice colors, i like the pic.
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the tree competes with the pine cone. I think if the tree/sky were darkened a bit it would make the pine cone 'pop' a little more and place emphsis on the foreground.
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Great shot !! I like it
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It is an interesting take I will admit.
Can you add your exif information for us please and thank you!
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I think it would look better if the tree in the background was a pine tree since the foreground is a pine cone. The photo has nice colors.
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its an awesome photo
but i think the pine cone and tree clash
it would be good with just either as the main feature or the tree of the far left or something but playing a minimal role
well done though

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An overall outstanding picture captured by you.I cannot improve on your picture.
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Old 11-07-2009, 08:52 AM
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I agree with the earlier comment about using a pine tree in the background, but for an additional reason. The pine cone seems to blend in with the tree in the background because of the similarity in colors. A pine tree would give contrast and make the pine cone stand out more. I like the way you made the pinecone the subject by blurring the background.
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