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Old 11-05-2009, 08:41 AM
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tHE lONELY TREE


Pls give ur vital suggestion.......

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Aperture : F/5.6
Shutter Speed: 1/60
Flash Not used
ISO:800
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Old 11-05-2009, 10:14 AM
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The Aperture wasn't open enough to let more light in! so it's kinda dark. The kit lens are not really that good for low level light situations without flash or a secondry lighting.
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Old 11-05-2009, 11:39 AM
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Sabyashachi, may I suggest that you remove the frames when you post in critique, that helps us to concentrate on the shot. nswphotos has given a general comment for no specific questions in your post. If you want a detailed analysis of your shots, please mention a little about the location, your thoughts about this shot and most important, what exactly you want to know from the forum, like exposure, focus, composition, colors etc.

I liked the monotone effect in the shot, its nice to know that we are from the same city.

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It is underexposed by 2-3 stops I reckon... There are no detail especially in the lower left section... My suggestion? If you're trying to shoot silhouette of this tree, get a bit closer, then get down really low, and point your camera up to the tree so that you get much less land in your composition. This way, you'll get better silhouette, with better lighting...
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Sabyashachi, may I suggest that you remove the frames when you post in critique, that helps us to concentrate on the shot. nswphotos has given a general comment for no specific questions in your post. If you want a detailed analysis of your shots, please mention a little about the location, your thoughts about this shot and most important, what exactly you want to know from the forum, like exposure, focus, composition, colors etc.

I liked the monotone effect in the shot, its nice to know that we are from the same city.

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Thnaks for your suggestion...................
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