Around the corner

[brasil0069]

I seem to be coming out of a dry spell. or am I ???
I was out to day and shot this. Question ?? What does this Need ???

Camera: Canon EOS 50D
Exposure: 0.017 sec (1/60)
Aperture: f/3.5
Focal Length: 18 mm
ISO Speed: 100

All comments or help are all ways welcome and needed. Hear to learn and help if I can.

Mike

[tvoelcker]

Paths make great leading lines so good job of recognizing that.
Your capture appears a bit dark but it could just be my monitor.
I don't think you have quite enough tonal variences to make this a good b&w shot.
Curious as to the color version.
Not real sure the landscape orientation is working here since although the path is nice, there is not much interest to the sides of it.
Perhaps a portrait orientation and filling the entire frame with the path might work better.
Just a few thoughts ..

[brasil0069]

Thanks Tom for your time to look and comment. I am going there next week to reshoot. The idea of portrait orientation and filling the entire frame with the path seem to be something I will try next time I am there.

Thank you again.

Mike