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Old 10-31-2009, 04:50 AM
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An Evening

Shutter Speed: 1/60
Aperture: 8
ISO:200
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I want to know about the composition & technical details about that shot.

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Old 10-31-2009, 04:55 AM
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The sky is lovely but the foilage that surrounds distracts me. I would have liked to have seen a bit more of the sun in the picture. Good shot, though.
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Old 10-31-2009, 04:58 AM
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Thanks.

Happy clicking.
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The colour is good. But too much black, shadow clipping. Silhuette is a very interesting, if you can see shapes.

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The colour is good. But too much black, shadow clipping. Silhuette is a very interesting, if you can see shapes.

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What you suggest how can i improve myself?
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First of all, WHAT A LOVELY SUNSET COLOUR!!! Never seen colour like this before

Just concerns about your composition... If you're shooting silhouette, my suggestion is try to pick something much simpler as your object. Try using a single tree only instead of lots like in your picture above. That way, your silhouette will be much stronger, better shaped, thus more inviting to the viewers..
Hope this will help you man
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First of all, WHAT A LOVELY SUNSET COLOUR!!! Never seen colour like this before

Just concerns about your composition... If you're shooting silhouette, my suggestion is try to pick something much simpler as your object. Try using a single tree only instead of lots like in your picture above. That way, your silhouette will be much stronger, better shaped, thus more inviting to the viewers..
Hope this will help you man
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Thnx. I'll keep ur advice in my mind
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