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Art · #1 (**permalink**) 10-09-2009, 01:54 AM

These umbrellas were taken in south beach, Miami, USA. by early morning

Can you please critic composition?

Thanks Art

This pic was taken with a Canon Rebel G and Kodak film ultra 400, later scanned, therefore there is no EXIF available

navcom · #2 (**permalink**) 10-09-2009, 02:09 AM

My friend, please tell me you didn't go to Miami for vacation? You live in Guadalajara...just a couple hours from some of the most beautiful coastline in the world. You going to Miami for vacation is like Santa Claus going to Siberia for the winter!

I like your photograph. Great composition. It might be my imagination but your horizon appears to be off just a little bit...but might be an illusion.

Would the umbrellas look better off to the left or right 1/3? Maybe...maybe not. Just thinking out loud.

Art · #3 (**permalink**) 10-09-2009, 02:35 AM

Jajajajajajaja, good point, guess what, I got a travel prize to Miami, so I had to spend some time in Miami on vacation, that's why, but I enjoy in Mexican beaches
Thanks for your comments
Art

brasil0069 · #4 (**permalink**) 10-09-2009, 03:21 AM

I like it, It has great detail and it shows anticipation for the Day.

Mike

Raigoki · #5 (**permalink**) 10-09-2009, 03:28 AM

hi!

i think it would be better to move closer to the 3 umbrellas, thus by doing that, it will eliminate excessive space arount the 3 umbrellas. and of course, applying rule of thirds horizontally. better yet, just crop the image to lessen the space arount the umbrella.

Art · #6 (**permalink**) 10-09-2009, 03:35 AM

Thanks for your comments Mike

Art · #7 (**permalink**) 10-09-2009, 03:37 AM

Thanks for your comments, I can crop it to see what you are suggesting
Art

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