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Old 09-30-2009, 04:08 PM
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Hello...Curious how the interplay of shadows and light work in this piece? There is a big variety here and I'm curious if it adds or takes away from the composition. I also would like to know what other general improvements could be made. Any general comments are welcome as well. Thanks for looking.

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Shutter Speed 1/60
Aperture Value 20.0
ISO Speed 100
Focal Length 36mm
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Old 10-02-2009, 01:44 PM
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Nice colours and interesting cloud, but i don't favour the shadows on the left, they aren't helping to enhance the pic of your landscape, instead, they are taking space on your frame. Consider adding something on the foreground when composing your shot to keep the viewers interest on your pic eg a tree, colourful flowers, structures etc. usage of leading lines also helps the viewers eyes into your frame.
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