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Ok i know im not supposed to put juts Critique plz so instead ill go with how is the composition. and if there are any other areas you would like to comment on they are always welcome.




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I would have liked to have seen the whole bench in the shot but I still like the composition. The problem is that you have over and underexposed areas in the photo.

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Personally I like the composition but I do feel as though you are slightly too close to the bench. Also as PhotoPhix said there are over exposed and underexposed areas in the photo.

Overall this is a nice photo. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 09-30-2009, 09:27 AM
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My take on your shot:
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Ah, this time I agree, looks more balanced.
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