|
|||
|
Hi
Would like to know how this photo can be improved?? Plz provide feedback on composition and does the crooked angle work?? Thoughts on any other perspective that could have been used. Looking forward to all the inputs I can get....plz view in large...TIA ![]() Camera: Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL Tv(Shutter Speed): 4Sec . Av(Aperture Value): F5.6 Exposure Compensation: 0 ISO Speed: 200 Focal Length: 25.0 mm Flash: Off
__________________
"Art is the most intense mode of individualism that the world has known." - Oscar Wilde Canon EOS 400D [EFS 18-55mm f/3.5 - 5.6 IS] Flickr Last edited by Abhi; 09-29-2009 at 07:57 AM. |
|
||||
|
In my humble opinion the crooked angle does not work for this image.I didnt realize that was a person sitting there. I thought at first it was just some big black glob blocking the lights. sorry.
I can totally see what you were going for now. I would think making the sillouette more prominet would be a wonderful touch
__________________
Olympus user, Fuji E900, a canon & last but not least a Minolta 35mm and some really old large format box cameras.Not to mention a whole bunch of other stuff. Paint Shop Pro X3, CS3,CS5, Portrait Professional, Topaz Adjust, Lucis Art and the list goes on........ www.alockintime.com |
|
|||
|
I agree that the angle does not work. Maybe if it was not so severe, but I think a normal horizon would work better. The silhouette is also to dark, try to brighten up your sky to make it pop more, right now it's just to hard to read. It was a nice try though, maybe a few changes could turn it into an interesting image. If you can't then maybe try a reshoot and see what you can do with it.
__________________
Flickr |
|
|||
|
Thank you for ur time, guys. Appreciate ur feedback very much.
__________________
"Art is the most intense mode of individualism that the world has known." - Oscar Wilde Canon EOS 400D [EFS 18-55mm f/3.5 - 5.6 IS] Flickr |
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.
This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.
Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:
For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!
To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.
Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter: