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Old 09-29-2009, 12:46 AM
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Hi! Do you have a question or specific thing you want critiqued? Do you have any EXIF data? Please read critique forum rules so we can help you better.
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Old 09-30-2009, 10:04 AM
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just my take:
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just my take:

The water is purple on your take...
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The water is purple on your take...
I was going to say, I think I like the original version better. What did you do Ken?
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General comment: very nice river disappearing into the distance, but the waterfall (a very interesting part of the photo!) is largely cut off. I'd love to see more of it.
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Welcome to DPS!! and I too would have like to see more of the waterfall!
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just my take:
I think the original was much better. But it is just me - I don't like too much tinkering (sorry - postproduction)
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I think a vertical image would have captured this waterfall much better.
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I also think a bit more waterfall and not as much as the greenery to the right.Still a nice shot.
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