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This is my first Post here . I want to improve my skills
Model : NIKON D60 ExposureTime : 1/250Sec FNumber : F10.0 ExposureProgram : Unknown (0) ISOSpeedRatings : 180 MaxApertureValue : F5.1 FocalLength : 38.00(mm) ExposureBiasValue : EV0.0 MeteringMode : Division Mode: Landscape Flash : Not fired(Compulsory) ColorSpace : sRGB CFAPattern : 8 Bytes CustomRendered : Normal process ExposureMode : Auto WhiteBalance : Auto DigitalZoomRatio : 1/1 FocalLength(35mm) : 57(mm) SceneCaptureType : Landscape Last edited by ranjithshenoyr; 09-29-2009 at 01:05 AM. |
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I was going to say, I think I like the original version better. What did you do Ken?
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General comment: very nice river disappearing into the distance, but the waterfall (a very interesting part of the photo!) is largely cut off. I'd love to see more of it.
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Welcome to DPS!!
and I too would have like to see more of the waterfall!
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I think the original was much better. But it is just me - I don't like too much tinkering (sorry - postproduction)
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I think a vertical image would have captured this waterfall much better.
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