Fisherman at shore

[erphotography]

Taken while camping at the beach in Puerto Rico. This would be my fisrt post and I want to start by being critiqued. Specifically trying to keep the sky from looking overexposed. Any advise is appreciated.


Sony DSRL-200
Focal lenght 18.0mm
35mm equivalent 27mm
ISO 100
Exposure 1/125
Aperture f/10.0

[nathanbarlow]

id say the sky is good - the vinigette isnt though IMO

[Art]

IMO, there is a lens aberration on the top of your pic which distracts my eyes, overall the intention is good
Art

[erphotography]

Yes, I did add the distortion. After a while of looking @ it, it didnt look neccesary on the shoot. still I kept it that way. I do agree that would look better without it. Thank you so much.