#1 (permalink)  
Old 09-18-2009, 04:28 AM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: niagara falls, ontario
Posts: 4
Default Waterfall (Decew Falls, St. Catharines, Ontario)

Decew Falls:


Flickr Pages:
Large Version Here...

More Information...

Camera: Canon EOS REBEL T1i
Exposure: 0.25 sec (1/4)
Aperture: f/16.0
Focal Length: 18 mm
Exposure: 0.00
ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: -2/3 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 09-18-2009, 07:46 AM
ohfour's Avatar
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 16
Default

The first thing that strikes me when I look at this is that it's actually not a bad shot. It's not perfect, but with a bit of work you could retake this and get something pretty neat.

My main issue is that the sky is blown out, and the foreground colors are quite dark. There are a few ways you could address that - one would be to see if there's a better time of day to take the shot, when the light in the foreground is really nice and the sky is not too bright. Another would be to take a couple of exposures, one with the foreground nicely exposed and the other with the sky nicely exposed, then combine them in Photoshop (or make a 'proper' HDR in Photomatix).

The light in the very top left corner is nice, so if you could get more of that into the foreground (by coming back at a different time of day) you might see a significant improvement :-) The advantage to using natural light is that when the light is right, it's very obvious. Your scene will look simply fantastic, and that isn't something an HDR can easily replicate.

You could also try tilting the camera down a bit to get slightly more of the river into the foreground. It might look better, it might not - you won't know unless you've tried :-p
__________________
I'd love for you to visit my portfolio!
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 09-18-2009, 01:41 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: niagara falls, ontario
Posts: 4
Default

Thanks for the indepth critic! Coming back at a differnt time sounds like a great idea, and next time it will be with a full frame camera so i will have a wider shot.

I think I will use a flash or two on a puffy cloud day--that should let the sky hang out a bit more
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0