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EXIF DATA:

Top Picture:
Camera - Canon EOS Digital Rebel XT
Aperture - f/3.5
Exposure - 1/3200 sec
ISO speed - 100
Exposure Bias - 0
Focal Length - 50mm

Bottom Picture:
Camera - Canon EOS Digital Rebel XT
Aperture - f/3.5
Exposure - 1/2000 sec
ISO speed - 100
Exposure Bias - 0
Focal Length - 50mm

Both pictures were taken out of the window of a moving car. Both pictures were edited the same way, with curve adjustment, contrast adjustment, and lens correction. The bottom photo had extra editing where i removed some houses and powerlines from the horizon. I thought the two pictures worked well one on top of the other.

Please tell me what you think. Any criticism, compliments, complaints, and advice is welcome.
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Default nice idea

i really like the idea of the two photos in one
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I like the idea but the black bar is really distracting. Maybe if you increased it a little and put a black frame around it, it might be easier to read. I hope that makes sense. Use the black bar to emphasize the fact its two pictures, so it doesn't read as if there was something in the way of that area.
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Thank you utsc2006. I know what you mean and that makes a lot of sense. It probably explains why a few people on my flickr thought it was the separation from the top of a window. I used the same technique in this photo but i think it worked alot better because you can obviously tell its two different images.

Thanks for the advice, ill keep that in mind for next time
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