Boat on the sea

[Enrique]

How I should improve this picture composition?

thank you very much
Enrique Vizcarra

Camera: Nikon D300
Lens: Tamron 28-75 at 28mm f8 variable speed (barckets 9 pictures)
HDR style
ISO 200

[windrider86]

A closer crop and do some adjusting so it isnt so bright. Man oh Man! This image has sooo much potential!

The clouds and the beach all lead your eyes right to the middle where the boats sits. Kudos on your angle!

[Enrique]

Hi,

I did some adjust, but I am not sure If I did on the rigth way

[ClemsonME2010]

Awesome capture. Can you post the original without the HDR effects applied?

[Enrique]

Originally Posted by ClemsonME2010

Awesome capture. Can you post the original without the HDR effects applied?

Sure, just keep in meant this is one of 9 pictures of the set I had to use to capture the HDR

As you can see, the picture was taken it at high contrast (afternoon before sunsets)


NOTE: Sorry by my english

[ClemsonME2010]

Your English is fine. I really like this image as an HDR as long as it's not overdone. I like the water color better in the second picture, but like everything else how it is. The first one looks a little more natural to me.

Although your attention is drawn to the boat due to it being lightened up a bit, it doesn't look very natural. Personally I'd tone it down a bit and maybe increase the brightness of the beach (or lower the black level) by just a hair so that the attention is still in the lower right corner of the image.

That's just me, though. Great shot!

[Enrique]

Originally Posted by ClemsonME2010

Your English is fine. I really like this image as an HDR as long as it's not overdone. I like the water color better in the second picture, but like everything else how it is. The first one looks a little more natural to me.

Although your attention is drawn to the boat due to it being lightened up a bit, it doesn't look very natural. Personally I'd tone it down a bit and maybe increase the brightness of the beach (or lower the black level) by just a hair so that the attention is still in the lower right corner of the image.

That's just me, though. Great shot!

Yes, you right, and I did fix it, just reload please,

Thank you
Enrique Vizcarra

[wal]

very interesting composition, lovely. the contrast are good too.