Dubai Dessert

[ChicagoT]

Just kiddin. This was taken at the flower garden in San Diego. What do you think?

[Mogen_david]

Add the EXIF... Well that's out of the way.

I like the image. I like the contrast of the moving water in the foreground, the geometric shapes in middle and the organic lines of the trees. These dark subjects contrast nicely against the bright sky.

However, overall the composition feels unbalanced. There is to much mass on the left hand side of the photo compared to the right. I'm wondering if this could be fixed by cropping tighter to the palm trees on the left so there isn't quite as much sky in that region of the photo.

I'm not completely convinced I like the tumble of trees to the right but that might have more to due with the unbalance than the objects themselves.