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Old 08-21-2009, 08:51 AM
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I am back after a long gap. OK, Here I am posting this photo taken with my simple mobile phone(thus,I cant provide much EXIF data). I don't know whether such cameras are allow here.My point in this snap is diagonal formation of parked cars.
Please tell me whether that makes an impression...

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Old 08-21-2009, 10:15 AM
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Any kind of camera is allowed as long as it takes pictures LOL.

For you shot if the main subject is the diagonal cars then you should have chosen a different point of view to get rid of most of the foliage that takes up most of the shot. maybe also try to work in some saturation and contrast, the colors are a bit washed out.
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Old 08-21-2009, 10:05 PM
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I would agree with barabe. The foliage detracts from the cars. The colour could be a little more vibrant, but it looks natural the way it is in this photo to me. I think this is the first post I have seen from a cell phone camera. Nice!
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Old 08-23-2009, 07:01 AM
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Hi- i have cropped the snap a bit, check it out...

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I agree that the trees take something away, but I'm more concerned about the lower right, the big bright spot, it pulls me right out of the picture. I like the colors though.
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