Opera House

[locojain]

Hi,
Its been long time since i posted something on this website. Now that i am back n still learning I need you people to critique my shots.
In here i have posted a pic which i feel is good coz the cloud curves and the water tails makes it quite diffrnt.
Please comment

Camera: Sony DSC-T2
Exposure: 0.006 sec (1/160)
Aperture: f/3.5
Focal Length: 6.3 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Exposure Bias: 0 EV

[hsun]

maybe fixing the horizon will makes this picture better, and if the opera house is your POI, then i think you should make it bigger and get rid of the dark building on the left.

[windrider86]

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[locojain]

I tried getting rid of it buuuh then i wanted the curves in the cloud n i think those curves are cool. buuh u are rite the building is a distraction

[windrider86]

Do you have your exif informatrion you can post here?

[stevoarnold]

I dont need the EXIF information to suggest that you might want to straighten the horizon as it is pretty wonky as it is.
if you do this you will probably want to warp the image in photoshop to ensure that the chimney stack on the left still lines up straight against the left edge of the photo

[san_at_cliff]

I believe in attempt to keep the structure on the left parallel to the frame, you lost the horizon ! Hard to get both right when you have wide angle. But horizon has to be straight, in my books !