Rat up a drain pipe

[clikrr]

I guess this fits into Urban Decay category. This is a shot of the bowels of the city in which i work... Im after crit' on light painting i guess... it could be made a bit more eery? Gimme your thoughts.

[hsun]

i think you should shoot it more to the center of the line. From my perception, everthing seems to converge to a single point in the center and everything is well devided into half, and it seems strange to see that the black line below is not really centered. Are you trying to capture the painting so that you have to shoot it a bit to the left?

[windrider86]

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