Taken through a hole in a bunker wall

[BriscoPhoto]

Hiking by an old bunker a few years ago on film (scanned it today), I saw the hole in the wall and took a shot of the cityscape that I saw through it:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/briscophoto/3786334267/

So, what I'm looking for feedback is:
1. how is the composition?
2. how is the crop?
3. should I have zoomed?
4, and what would you have done differently?

Thanks! Looking forward to some comments and suggestions!

[denja]

Very nice image! You have a great eye. Thanks for sharing.

[n_mazur]

I can't say that I would have done anything differently. And if I did do anything differently, I would have regretted it after seeing your version. I really like it. I don't think I'd change it at all.

[subyello]

Likewise, great pic and cnicely executed.

[zona5101]

If you didn't explain what it was I would have thought you PP some crazy vignette as there isn't a known point of reference for the viewer. [Like there would be for a silhouetted window or door frame]. This would be a nice shot to try some HDR... melding two exposures so there is some detail in the foreground wall so the viewer could understand what they were looking at without explaination.

[windrider86]

I'm willing to bet that you'll get more feedback if you actually post the image here instead of a link. Could you also post your exif information? Please and thank you

[n_mazur]

I think as long as you approprietly title the image there doesn't need to be any further explanation or editing. "Through bunker wall" or something like that.

[dcclark]

Cool idea. My only complaint -- and I reserve this kind of complaint for images I already like -- is this: I think that you could have made it a little bit more interesting if you had been a bit closer to the hole, so that it filled a little bit more of the frame. There is just a little bit too much blackness around the outside edges. Another solution would be a slightly closer crop. Don't go TOO close -- just a little bit less of the darkness. I love the clarity of the city, and as mentioned above an appropriate title will make the purpose clear. Well done!