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Old 06-15-2009, 07:52 AM
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Hi,
In this the snap I have tried to place the branches and sky diagonally and the flowers shooting into sky space. Please Comment me about this composition...
(off course the sky is a PS gradient)
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Camera: Olympus FE310,X840,C530
Exposure: 0.002 sec (1/640)
Aperture: f/4.6
Focal Length: 21.7 mm
ISO Speed: 80
Exposure Bias: +1 EV
Flash: Off
Software:Photoshop 7
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Old 06-16-2009, 12:18 PM
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Flowers look severly under-exposed and there is a rather harsh glare on the foliage.
I think I might had zoomed in on the group of flowers to the left to simplify the composition.
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I agree. I think the flowers and the foliage blend a bit to much to get the desired effect. It is a little busy to me.
I do like the natural color contrast with the greens, yellows and beautiful blue sky.
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