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Old 06-09-2009, 03:29 PM
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Default Detailed moon?

i hope this one is better than the one i post yesterday with title "Cloudy moon"

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Shutter speed : 1/5

if anyone have a constructive critique ,don`t feel shy to write it,just tell me
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Old 06-09-2009, 05:25 PM
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I think it is a nice shot of a full moon and you did a good job with it. I would suggest that you crop in much closer to the actual subject (the moon). All the solid black empty sky around it does not add to your subject and if it (the moon) were larger we could view the detail better. Hope that helps.
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Old 06-09-2009, 07:04 PM
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agree 100% w/ trader
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Old 06-10-2009, 01:12 AM
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Much better,

I agree with the others about cropping a bit around.
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I agree with what's been said, but wanted also to say that this is a much better job than the "Cloudy Moon" of yesterday! Keep on shooting!
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I think it is a nice shot of a full moon and you did a good job with it. I would suggest that you crop in much closer to the actual subject (the moon). All the solid black empty sky around it does not add to your subject and if it (the moon) were larger we could view the detail better. Hope that helps.

thx for the advice,now i crop the image and the result is much better
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