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Old 06-08-2009, 03:29 PM
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HI it`s my first time to post in critique section,all this time i was posting my picture in share your shoot section...
i hope u guys also have time to take a look my picture at share your shoot section and give a critique?

and this the EXIF data for the picture below
Iso 800
f8.0
shutter speed 2''5
vivid
fluorescent
time taken 21:19
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Old 06-09-2009, 02:07 AM
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I think you put your ISO too high to be able to see the details of the moon clearly, right now it just looks like a verry bright spot light. I would have put a ISO 100 to get more details plus i would have put the aperture value to F11 to get DOF.

This is what i got using a 300mm, ISO 100, F11, and 1/125s Exposure.

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Old 06-09-2009, 02:51 AM
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It looks like you exposed for the area around the moon & did not expose for the ball of the moon itself. I agree that your ISO should have been lower and your aperture smaller. I happened to photograph the moon a couple nights ago with a slight haze, but here is what mine looked like with the following settings:
Camera: Canon EOS 50D
Exposure: 0.04 sec (1/25)
Aperture: f/16.0
Focal Length: 380 mm
ISO Speed: 100

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Old 06-09-2009, 08:45 AM
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@ Barabe and meadster : thx for the critique, my camera is pocket not dslr,
my camera is canon powershot sx200 is with 12x zoom
the smallest aperture is f.8
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