Probably my First good Photo

[Karthigeyan]

Just took this a couple of weeks ago and wanted to know what can be done better!!



Thanks!!

[barabe]

Welcome to DPS,

first you shoule read rhe rules for posting, your shot is a bit big for the critique section and EXIF files are a must for critique.

For your shot, the first thing that strikes me is that it is badly underexposed, with EXIF files we could see what you did wrong on it. The horizon is slanted to the right and this should be corrected. for composition, the sky is a bit boring so i would crop out some of it to position the water a bit higher to respect the rule of 1/3.

I hope this helps.

[ricklumpas]

Welcome to DPS.

I wish I could see the sun and not just its rays' reflection on the water. I think it is too dark (underexposed). And the horizon needs to be straightening. I guess the last 2 could be improved on PP esp. if you have RAW file on this picture.

Go out, shoot and then share!

[kencaleno]

You want to end up with something like this:

[paulq]

I agree that the scene is underexposed. The reflecitons are nice but it could have been better if there are more light in the sky. Thanks for sharing.

[MihadAli]

The horizon could have been lower a little bit. It would have bee better if there was some color or sun.