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Old 06-03-2009, 02:10 PM
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need critique on composition, framing, editing, and everything else you find relevant. Thanx in advance

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Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/400)
Aperture: f/2.8
Focal Length: 5.8 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
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Old 06-03-2009, 04:06 PM
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I like the processing...the graininess of this photo. The comp looks good to me, I would probably crop right below the brick wall though.
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I agree with the crop suggestion!

Awesome composition by the way, I'd try and take a full body shot of the statues, and probably title this photo "There's someone out there".

Something about this photo makes me get this x-file-ish idea!
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Old 06-05-2009, 08:15 AM
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Yes, now that I hide the bottom part all the way to the wall, it does look better. I just did not notice that before... Have to start thinking about that kind of stuff.

Thank you both very much.
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