#1 (permalink)  
Old 01-21-2009, 04:18 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 21
Default Hunting in Sweden

I took this on a walk in the forest where i grew up. what i would love some input on is if there are ways to make this more interesting, and also if you think it's too dark... any other input is also welcome, of course!


hunting tower

Canon EOS Rebel XT
f/7.1
ISO 100
Exposure time 1/100
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 01-21-2009, 06:12 PM
fletch's Avatar
dPS +1000 Club
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Sheffield, England
Posts: 2,000
Default

As I've said before recently, some subjects are just not that interesting and no amount of photographical compostion and jiggery pokery are going to make a wall hanger of an image.

The subject in your photo is very central and fills a lot of the frame, making this a photo of a wooden hut on stilts with nothing else going for it. The exposure is OK in a difficult backlit situation but the subject either needs to very strong and intersesting or it need to be within a setting rather than framed against the sky.
__________________
Fletch

<< blog >> - flickr
Olympus E510 - Ok to edit and re-post on DPS only
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 01-21-2009, 09:33 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 21
Default thanks!

that's good input. i appreciate it.
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 01-21-2009, 09:40 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Alameda, CA USA
Posts: 14
Default

i think the composition would have been good if you got a bit more under it and got more of the legs/stilts in. Or maybe even tilted your camera a bit so that there's more interest in the shot.
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 01-24-2009, 03:10 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 21
Default

thanks. i was wondering about that. good input.
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 01-24-2009, 03:29 PM
RoyL's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Adelaide, South Australia
Posts: 891
Default

I like the somewhat quirky image that you have made here, and See no problems at all with the subject matter, the centered layout which isn't really, and there is absolutely NO subject on the face of this earth or above that cannot be used to create and interesting composition. And I think that just about covers most of the opinionated critiques read so far.

Normally you would look for a composition that did not include the background trees but they fill the space. One comment about shooting something like this, try different apertures because you should have been able to blur the trees in the background a bit.

The tower needs some sharpening. There is a lot of detail that is not showing as the image is a bit flat.

Some tonal adjustment, curves, to add some depth to the clouds as well. Will change the whole image.

And even I can see that this is no wooden hut on stilts, it is a fire lookout and I live in a city. A hut would have a roof.
__________________
Canon DSLR User
Flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/22338756@N03/
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 01-24-2009, 03:47 PM
fletch's Avatar
dPS +1000 Club
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Sheffield, England
Posts: 2,000
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by RoyL View Post
I...and there is absolutely NO subject on the face of this earth or above that cannot be used to create and interesting composition...
Really! Sound like a challenge. If I start a thread in the games section asking for interesting compositions of dull subjects are you up for it? IMO some things are inhernetly dull.
__________________
Fletch

<< blog >> - flickr
Olympus E510 - Ok to edit and re-post on DPS only
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 01-24-2009, 03:51 PM
tvoelcker's Avatar
dPS +1000 Club
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Tyler,Texas
Posts: 1,182
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by fletch View Post
Really! Sound like a challenge. If I start a thread in the games section asking for interesting compositions of dull subjects are you up for it? IMO some things are inhernetly dull.
Sounds like a great challenge. Never been in the games section but I would be game for this. As Doc Holiday would say " I'm your Huckaberry"
Good ole RoyL, always makes me stop,think and reconsider
__________________
Tom
Canon XTI- EF50mm f1.4USM, Sigma 18-200mm f3.5-6.3DC,EFS18-55mm kit lens,Konica Minolta DIMAGE Z10
http://picasaweb.google.com/tvoelcker
http://www.flickr.com/photos/tvoelcker/
photos may be edited for use on DPS
Reply With Quote
  #9 (permalink)  
Old 01-24-2009, 11:51 PM
oxfordy's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Oxford, New Zealand
Posts: 93
Default

- get up the jolly thing
- get someone else to climb up
- its in a forest; get some foreground trees in the shot
- post process the sky to make it more dramatic

Just some ideas
__________________
------------------------------------------------
David: Nikon D80, 28-100mm AF Nikor, 50mm AF Nikor, 70-300mm Tamron, 10-24mm Tamron, Canon PowerShot A590 IS.
Photo Blog: www.photos.fords.co.nz
Reply With Quote
  #10 (permalink)  
Old 01-26-2009, 01:46 PM
AnnetteJ's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Notts / Derbys border, UK
Posts: 847
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by tvoelcker View Post
Sounds like a great challenge. Never been in the games section but I would be game for this. As Doc Holiday would say " I'm your Huckaberry"
Good ole RoyL, always makes me stop,think and reconsider
That sounds like a fun challenge - do it! I'd join in! In fact if you don't do it soon, I just might!
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Tags
forest, hunting, sweden, tower

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0