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It was a nice evening and I went out for a photo-shoot.

This photograph was taken using a Canon 10d at Aperture f/3.5 and Exposure 0.8

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Old 02-07-2012, 06:36 AM
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hi,

It was a nice evening and I went out for a photo-shoot.

This photograph was taken using a Canon 10d at Aperture f/3.5 and Exposure 0.8

Please comment.

Thanks,
Try upping the aperture, it will put the foreground in focus too because somehow the duck looks a bit blurry around the edge... Unless, you purposing widen the aperture to put the duck OOF.

Another thing I learnt from this website, include more sky if they are dramatic, if not, put the focus on something else...
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Old 02-07-2012, 02:35 PM
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I order to get a good critique, you'll need to read the rules/guidelines for the critique section and include the information they ask for. Thank you in advance for doing so and then editing your post!
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I think if you straightened the horizon and cloned out the distracting lights in the background, you'd have a pretty cool shot. I would also recommend a smaller aperture for more DOF.

I can't get the ducks to stay still for me like that!
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