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It's an interesting shot. I feel like the composition could be better, but I'm just beginning with working on my composition so I'll refrain, but I feel like your greens are a little oversaturated, especially with the leaves of the trees.
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I agree with the above comments. The green is way over-saturated & the composition doesn't work? When you approach a subject you should be thinking about what, for you, makes it a subject. For critique's sake let's assume that the subject in this shot is the pattern of the stone bench & grass underneath & the texture of the stone?
The furniture, trees & definitely the building in the background all detract from the subject by drawing the eye. Also the angle the shot's been taken from seems like standard adult eye-level which will pretty much always contribute a snapshot feel to a picture. There's a truism that painters add stuff to the picture to make it good but photographers remove stuff to make it good. |
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I agree pretty much with the above comments.
I can't tell what mm your lens was set on but if it was more than 18mm you could go for a wider angle and use one of the chairs in the background to stand in, get closer, shoot from a higher angle, and isolate the circular bench. Other than that you might need a step ladder. |
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