Sunset beach, Kuai, HI

[bigben6]

I didnt have much zoom and this was hand help, in retrospect with more zoom, i think the kids across the way would be more obviously the center of attention, i feel like they are lost in this show but i liked to colors, suggestions on composition given my limitations?

Other thoughts welcome as well

[tomservo51]

Originally Posted by bigben6

I didnt have much zoom and this was hand help, in retrospect with more zoom, i think the kids across the way would be more obviously the center of attention, i feel like they are lost in this show but i liked to colors, suggestions on composition given my limitations?

Other thoughts welcome as well

I would crop the bottom 1/5 of the picture.