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I am interested in a critique about the composition of this photo. I shot this with a focal point in mind but would be interested to know what viewers see as the focal point or if one is present.
Photo data: Sony SLT-A55V f/13 1/200 sec ISO-100 Focal length 40mm |
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My eye rests on the mountain on the right side.
I like the lines and the framing in this shot. I first questioned if the right side mountain was to far over in the frame but the longer I look at it, it seems to work. The mountain in the middle seems a little light but maybe not. Nice shot. |
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I think composition is nice. I agree about it being slightly overexposed. losing some detail on the mountain and perhaps the clouds too... still though I really like it
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Thank-you all for the critique. I struggled a lot deciding if the tree on the left should be in the composition or not. This scene was also changing a lot when I was photographing it. Clouds were rolling in and out around the mountain on the right, unfortunately I didn't catch a nice shot with the clouds. If you look closely in the middle of the mountain on the right it appears out of focus, it's actually a small faint cloud just before it evaporated.
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Also, I like having the tree on the left to provide some depth. I see the focal points as the distant mountains. Nice shot.
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