|
|||
|
The water definitely looks milky, so it seems you got what you were going for! I'd maybe consider a different angle, so as to have less "negative space" at the top, but that's just my own personal taste. Nice work!
__________________
http://fineartamerica.com/profiles/c...otography.html |
|
||||
|
I think your exposure time is fine. But I'd really like more detail in the background. I'd recommend shooting when the ambient light is higher so you can get more detail with the same shutter speed.
__________________
Flickr |
|
||||
|
Personally, I think having a bit more background will be nicer, maybe shoot from an angle where you get the milky water somewhere at the middle bottom of the shot and the stairs at the back filling up the upper portion of the photo and slightly higher exposure on the stairs.
__________________
Not A Photographer, Not Yet. Flickr Photostream Olympus OMD EM5 9-18mm 40-150mm 12-50mm Hokkaido Gallery Egypt Gallery |
|
||||
|
I want to thank everyone for the great comments and ideas. I agree there should be a better angle and more clarity, but this was just an opportunity shot. It was late and I had very little light at all to work with. I had no tripod, all I could do was to find something to set the camera on to get what I got. If by some chance I can revisit, I will try some of the suggestions. Thanks again, very much for your support.
__________________
j.57.smith |
|
|||
|
I agree with different time of day or different angle but there is still something I like about it as is. It breaks almost all the rules but there is a sense of mystery to it.
Maybe I am reading more into it than is there. Never be afraid to try something even if you don't have all the "right" equipment or are there at the "wrong" time of day, or just don't have enough time to do it justice. Make what you can of it. At least you did learn to blur the water. |
|
||||
|
Quote:
__________________
j.57.smith |
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.
This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.
Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:
For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!
To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.
Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter: