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All three are really nice. I like the third one best I think. The first is a beautiful settings, but my eye is not really drawn anywhere. I think I need something to focus on in this beautiful setting (a swan, maybe?)
The second one is beautiful, but is pretty busy. Lots of stuff/debris in the foreground kind of distracts me a bit. The last one is my favorite. It's beautiful, and the road kind of grabs me and pulls me in. I'd like to see number 3 with the road just a bit to the right of the composition rather than centered, just to compare and see how it would look if it followed the traditional "rule of thirds" more closely. These are all kind of nit-picky critiques, however. I like all three photos as they are. |
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I haven't seen the three but the shot above is great... I would have cropped out some of the bush behind the flower and got more of the refelection and maybe added a focal point to the scene... a duck or a swan or anything to be a focal point.
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