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Old 12-29-2011, 11:57 PM
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Default A sea arch near Port Campbell National Park, Victoria, Australia

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At last managed to go to the Port Campbell National Park, Victoria, Australia and see the one of the worlds greatest landmark. A was able to get few shots and at this stage processing some of them. Not very happy with the outputs, i fell like something is missing in the picture. it could be because of composition? processing skill? i don't know. Please tell what you fell about it.

A sea arch near Port Campbell National Park, Victoria, Australia | Flickr - Photo Sharing!
A sea arch near Port Campbell National Park, Victoria, Australia | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

Canon 50D, 16mm, f/9, ISO 100, 1/85,
Detail enhanced using tone mapping option in Photomatix.

will appreciate your comment or critique.

Thanks

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Old 12-30-2011, 12:07 AM
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Less foreground perhaps, or better yet a lower vantage point might have helped, its maybe a little too busy. Colors look fine to me, but the arch itself is not separated enough fomr the green foreground to really pop IMO
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Old 12-30-2011, 04:46 PM
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We would greatly appreciate it if you would post your photo here for us. Much much easier to critique a photo if we dont have to flip from one page to another. Thank you
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I like the colors. The horizon is crooked. It distracts me.
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