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I am VERY new to all of this, and wanted to get some feedback. I thought it was a pretty good shot but please give any suggestions on angle, composition, post, everything, Thanks!
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I've left out some needed info, I do not know what the EXIF is, took this shot on a Nikon
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As a slightly "gritty" urban image it works for me.
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I think it would help if the top horizontal line was parallel to the top of the frame and if you toned down that bright area in the upper right.
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I agree with Krusty on the top horizon and the bright spot.
Otherwise I am stuck between two thoughts. Either more crop or less. It kind of feels too much in the middle. I would like to see all of the diaginal support attaching to the vertical support and the entire vertical support. Or a tighter crop with only the two arches and the diaginal support. Keep at it.
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