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Old 12-11-2011, 07:04 AM
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I would like to get some thoughts on composition of this shot. Theres not a lot of subject matter, just a scenic view and some small towers.But some decent colors. All comments are appreciated.

Camera GENERAL IMAGING CO. X5
Exposure 0.002 sec (1/420)
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Focal Length 73.5 mm
ISO Speed 80

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Old 12-11-2011, 02:25 PM
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Looks as if the only other thing you could focus on as a subject would be the bare trees. Perhaps you could crop so that those are more prominent and get the towers out of there. Love the colors.
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Looks as if the only other thing you could focus on as a subject would be the bare trees. Perhaps you could crop so that those are more prominent and get the towers out of there. Love the colors.
Thanks for all the great comments BPhil, I am gonna try some other cropping, and play with it and see if I can come up with something a little different. Thanks again
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I would clone out that white thing in the background and use that bare tree for your subject. However, I don't think you should center it. I think the trees might be a little underexposed.
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Old 12-14-2011, 06:14 AM
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I would clone out that white thing in the background and use that bare tree for your subject. However, I don't think you should center it. I think the trees might be a little underexposed.
Thanks Krusty, I'm gonna do some work to it but I'm not sure how to clone anything yet but I'm learning. Thanks again
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