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Old 12-03-2011, 01:24 PM
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Heres a crude and quick shot I took when I was at the beach over Thanksgiving. I used a Nikon D5100 with a 300 mm telephoto zoom lens. The blue color reflecting off the pier is light coming from a huge ferris wheel close by. I think the pic is pretty cool but if I would have put more thought into it then I the composition could have came out better. What do yall think composition wise? what could I have done better? this was my first ocean shot and thought the water effect was pretty cool too. Kinda looks ghostly and kinda dreamy.
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Old 12-03-2011, 04:51 PM
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did you use a tripod on this shot?
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YesI used a tripod.

I took a few shots. I think this one in particular was a bracketted shot with 3 images set at 0.7. I may not have anchored the tripod good enough in the sand so there may have been some camera shake b/c of that.

So with the long exposure mixed with bracketted I dont know it may have decreased the quality .
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Yeah, you have some kind of weird double imaging thing going on. The long exposure effect on the pier is a nice concept, but that camera shake (or whatever it is) ruins the effect.
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It does kind of tell a story though? It was late, it was Thanksgiving, drink (or something) may have been taken
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At first look, the multiple image thing is disturbing. But looking at it from an artistic point of view, this could be a good thing.
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Old 12-05-2011, 10:10 PM
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I expect to see a ghost or skull and crossbones in this image, as it look like something from Halloween to me. Cool effect, but I think having a subject/focal point would help a lot.
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