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Old 11-07-2011, 01:12 AM
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Out today at Tumwater park on the deshutes river..... i think this didnt turn out to bad, as i had posted another one in Share My shots..... but like this one alot better.....
what are your comments on exposure, composition etc?

As i had stated in Share my shots i was having trouble with the exposures...

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Old 11-07-2011, 01:15 AM
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I like it, but would have liked to see more real water, with a tad less milky. Looks airbrushed to me. JMO, still a nice photo.
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Old 11-07-2011, 02:22 AM
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How about posting the EXIF?

I see you put some thought in your composition by placing the length of the stream on the diaginal and having the trees on each side frame the shot.

Personally I want to see the other falls at the bottom of the frame. A perspective of lower and a little to the camera left?
The thin branch coming in from the tree in the forground camera right is distracting.
The water just below the falls is blown out. Where was the sun in this shot? Could you take it earlier ot later (Golden Hours)?
Play with the images some more. The colors seem a bit flat. Add some saturation and see what happens.

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