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Hi all, this is a sunset that invites you to say "see you tomorrow" don't you think so?

Can you please critic, composition? it was cropped and edited for saturation and balance

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Old 11-04-2011, 07:59 PM
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I like the composition here and the colors are great. The only problem I have, is it looks like there is some lens distortion on the horizon line. Maybe it's just the land on the right side. I'm not sure, but it looks like the horizon sags just a tad.
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The horizon looks slightly curved to me also, but that is fixable with PP. It's a nice sunset shot still, though.

If you want to take it to the next level, you can try to work some foreground interest into the shot, but you'll probably have to bracket your shots and blend the exposures to overcome the dynamic range issue.
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I like the composition here and the colors are great. The only problem I have, is it looks like there is some lens distortion on the horizon line. Maybe it's just the land on the right side. I'm not sure, but it looks like the horizon sags just a tad.
Correct it is land in the right side
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The horizon looks slightly curved to me also, but that is fixable with PP. It's a nice sunset shot still, though.

If you want to take it to the next level, you can try to work some foreground interest into the shot, but you'll probably have to bracket your shots and blend the exposures to overcome the dynamic range issue.
Yes I know, but in the beach sometimes the is no subject of interest to put in the foreground
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