|
|||
|
|
|
||||
|
I'm very much an amateur but for me there's almost two images here - by cutting them in half horizontally. As it is I find it a bit busy.
I think it would look good with the top half as the image with the boundary at the lower edges of the bridge construction.
__________________
Canon 600D: EFS 18 - 55 f/3.5 - 5.6 ISII: EFS 55 - 250 f/4 - 5.6 IS: EF 50mm f/1.8 II: Meike extension tubes: http://www.flickr.com/photos/rose_mcgillicuddy/ |
|
||||
|
Thanks for posting and asking for critique. Per the forum rules, one needs to post the exif so a more informed opinion can be made. Give this a read... Critique Forum Rules
Keep shooting and posting
__________________
Canon Rebel XS 18-55mm IS, 75-300mm, 50mm f1.8, 70-200mm f2.8 Flickr Always ok for DPS users to critique and edit my photos for instructional purposes. |
|
||||
|
I agree with Elmo it is all about the emotion you want ot invoke. If you are going for a post-apocalyptic stark reality type image, then maybe the contrast is actually too low. If the emotion you are trying to convey is lazy evening sunset with slow -moving train, then the contrast is too high for my taste. I don't like the artifacts in the sky and the water the way it is processed now and would try and rein those in...
Cool image and TFS, Frank |
|
||||
|
Please post your exif data.
I say "yes." You have a huge part of the image that is black with no detail at all and part of your sky is blown out. If you looked at a histogram of your shot, you'll see there are almost no pixels in the middle of the range and you have severe clipping at the dark end. I didn't think you were going for the post-apocalyptic look in a shot of a train trestle.
__________________
GREG - Canon XS with 18-55 kit flickr flickriver My 500px "You can't be young forever, but you can always be immature." - Larry Andersen. |
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.
This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.
Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:
For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!
To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.
Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter: