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Went to the Evesham (UK) Mop last night and got some shots.

Please feel free to critique the image but if you do what would you change and why?



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Old 10-07-2011, 05:35 PM
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Looks like a cool abstract shot. The only thing I would want to change is to shoot this in landscape format because the lights feel cut off on the sides.
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I really like this shot and generally enjoy this type of shot. The one thing I might change here is cropping some of the foreground beneath the white lights. I'm not really sure what it is and it doesn't seem to add much to the overall image. Otherwise, nice job!
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An abstract form that evokes a sense of mystery to what is going on there.. Agree with krusty79 on the landscape format tho.
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I like the abstractness of it ... I would crop out the entire foreground with the light shining on the ground -- it's distracting to me ...
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