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Old 09-30-2011, 10:54 PM
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I was excited to capture the sun star and I thought capturing the leaves in the shot made it more interesting. Any thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated!
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Old 10-05-2011, 02:47 AM
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I was excited to capture the sun star and I thought capturing the leaves in the shot made it more interesting. Any thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated!
I do like the leaves very much, but what is the subject? My eye is drawn to the reflection on the arch but then over to the sun star...I LIKE this photo, I think it works and I am not sure what you would do different but that's my thoughts...FWIW!

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Old 10-06-2011, 10:02 PM
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Interesting composition. I find myself going back and forth between the sun and the arch, like they are both competing for my attention. I think it would help if one was clearly the primary subject.
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